Hi, I would like to ask for your help to help me re-write my essay that I would

Hi,
I would like to ask for your help to help me re-write my essay that I would like to apply to NYU Stern MBA Program. Previously I have applied to NYU Stern, but I was denied, and I believed one of the weaknesses was through my essays. Therefore, please kindly help me with the NYU Stern’s MBA Essay 1.
The prompt of the essay is below: Essay 1
In today’s global
business environment, the only constant is change. Using NYU Stern’s brand call
to action, we want to know how you view change. Change: ___ it.
Fill in the blank with a word of your choice. Why does this word resonate with
you? How will you embrace your own personal tagline while at Stern? (350 words;
double-spaced; 12-point font)
In here, I am attaching:
1. My current essay draft
2. My previous essay that got me rejected last year
I hope that this could be useful for you to write the admission essay. I believe you would be able to see how I write there.
Some information about me that you need to know is that I am an international, not a native english speaker, so please do not use too many unusual english terms so that there is not too many doubts.
Please feel free to change the “Word” that I have chosen too, should you have a better idea for the essay. Please do let me know should you need more information about anything (my experience, background, etc.)
Thank you,
Reference:
NYU Stern Website: https://www.stern.nyu.edu/programs-admissions/full-time-mba
Essays: https://www.stern.nyu.edu/programs-admissions/mba-programs/admissions/essays

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