you used First Person in the MBA Concentration component; you must use Third Person Based on the requirements from the Assignment Guidelines and from the Rubric; here is my Feedback as it relates t Original Papers

you used First Person in the MBA Concentration component; you must use Third Person 

Based on the requirements from the Assignment Guidelines and from the Rubric; here is my Feedback as it relates to your Capstone Project.

1) Your introductory Heading should show as:

MBA Concentration: Incorrect: Should be “MBA Concentration: Corporate Innovation”

I did NOT deduct points; however, in Week 7, your heading should be as above.

2) Why did you choose your specific Concentration? – NO, the reason for choosing your MBA Concentration was NOT explained.

3) Were there concepts mentioned from the student’s MBA Concentration? – Yes, the concepts from your Concentration were mentioned.

4) Did you tie in the Course Concepts to your Capstone Project? – Yes; the Concentration Concepts were tied to your Capstone Project

5) Did you mention the MBA Concentration classes that provided you with the concepts that you mentioned? – NO; the student did not mention any of his MBA classes that provided the Concentration concepts.

6) Peer Reviews – refer to the Rubric Detail Sheet within Grade Center